I tried a few thinks with Arlina's hair as well, but I don't think I was quite so successful.  I'll have to keep trying different things.

This page is a bit condensed from how I envisioned the scene originally. The movie the plays in my head could never fit on a single page and I didn't what to drag this scene out too much. There is fine line between dragging the story too much and pushing the story forward to quickly.  I tend to error on the side of too fast since I prefer fast paced stories but I know people want a chance to get to know the characters better, so I'm going to try to slow things down.

Let me know what you think of the story so far.