I worked one the backgrounds more on this page and cut down on the characters.  Just trying something a little easier. I want to get the characters into the elven village before I change their designs so that there isn't some odd plot hole about why the characters suddenly look different.

I've gotten some feedback on my comic and will be making some changes as we go along.  Let me know if you like the new changes and if you have any other suggestions from improving the comic. I'm making this comic because I want to improve and I can't improve without feedback.  So help me out and I'll try to give you the best comic I can in return.